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The following story is semi-fictional. It is a mixture of fictional names, and real names.

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Enjoy.

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"I told you not to get on your laptop yet!" My father bellowed at me.

"But I paid for it!" I replied to him sternly.

"I wouldn't give a damn if you were the owner of Microsoft™ I told you you weren't to get on it until I set up the security on it!" Dad said.

I ignored him and walked to my room, locked the door and sat down on my bed...

"He isn't going to keep me from that, and I'm sick of this..." I thought, then grabbed my spare key from the desk, packed up a few things including my laptop, put a 20 in my watch-pocket and put the rest of my money in my wallet.

"This will show him..." Again thinking, as I climbed out the window of my first-story window.

I walked over to the car and looked at it. I had just a learners permit, so I wasn't really allowed to drive the car, but I had to get away. I needed some major alone time.

I unlocked the car and shut the door quietly, then started it. Lucky our car had a quiet engine. If I tried to start the Nissan™ I would have alerted dad.

Not in the mood for music, I turned the radio off and shifted into reverse. The car took off in reverse and I slammed on the brakes, just inched from hitting dads car.

"That was close" I said, shaking a bit. Then I shifted into "D" and drove right through our yard and got on the street.

I slowed down to 35, the marked speed, and drove right past a police car. Lucky no one was in it...

"I'm out of the house, I pretty much stole the car, and I don't have any idea where to go." I said then drove over to a McDonalds on SR-256 so I could pick up their free Wifi™

After turning the laptop on, it picked up wireless immediately. I checked on Google Maps™ and decided the only place I could go was Texas. I knew it was a long way, but I didn't have any friends here in Ohio to stay with.

"Okay" Gripping the steering wheel, still trying to gather all my thoughts. "If I take I-40 W to I-30 W, I can make it in..." Looking at the map, "Only 20 hours..." I sighed at the length but it was the shortest choice.

Shifted into "D" and drove onto the freeway. My speeds reached 60 pretty quick. It was the first time I had ever been on the freeway. "Okay... Just stay in my lane..."

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4 Hours Later... (4 Hours Driving)
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I felt my eyes drooping. I hadn't had barely any sleep the night before. It was a choice I'll regret.

After blinking a few times, my eyes closed more than half way and my head fell forward, but I hit my head on the steering wheel and it woke me up.

"I need sleep..." I thought, as I pulled into one of the truck stops. Within minutes, I was asleep. I hadn't locked the doors...

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8 Hours Later(4 Hours Driving, 8 Hours Idle)
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I opened my eyes and looked at the sky. It was blue and the sun was beating down on the windshield. I got out of the car and went in to get a drink and a snack.

After that, I went back to the car and got in, put it into reverse and started backing up, but noticed something odd in the driving. The steering was rough. I had to find out, but that didn't take long at all.

There was a gauge on the dash that told me that the rear right tire was flat. So I got out and checked it. It was entirely flat. So I drove it to the pump very slowly, to avoid damaging the rim.

After I filled it, I was finally set to go,  so I got in and drove off.

Getting onto the freeway again, I drove for the next 16 hours straight.

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16 Hours Later(20 Hours Driving, 8 Hours Idle)
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I stopped the car near the lines of some wooded area. I jumped out of the car and ran in to pee.

I finished and got back in the car, realizing how tired I was. But I didn't want to sleep again.

I drove until I came to Austin, then drove to Kyle's house.

The brakes screeched when I stopped and I looked up the drive way, then chose to finally pull in.

After I got out of the car, I walked up to the door and knocked. Kyle answered the door.

"Cris??? What in the world are you doing here?" He asked me first thing.

"I drove here... I need to stay away from my house for a while, my dads being moody and crap." I replied.

"Fine, but you stay in the den. No sleeping with me, I've got my girlfriend over tonight, and I hope to score with her" He gave me a stern look.

"Okay... You two have fun..." I said, lifting an eyebrow. "Just be safe" I said.

"Shut up!" He pushed me jokingly into the wall and shut the door.

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Later that night...
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I sat at the table eating a peanut butter and jelly sandwich. For some reason, that's all I wanted.

Kyle was in the living room being kinky with his girlfriend, trying to kiss her and telling her things that were inaudible to me.

I decided to go take a shower and wash my clothes so I went down to the basement, tossed my clothes in to wash and went upstairs, covering myself in just a robe, to take a shower.

As I walked past Kyle and his girlfriend, Kyle's girlfriend, who she introduced herself as Megan, asked me if I wanted to join them in the hide-away bed.

Quite surprised, I declined the offer. "Sorry Meg, no thanks..."

"Aww come on, please? I'll let you touch me" She said with a flirty voice.

"No." Was my simple reply, and I turned and started to make my way upstairs.

Meg got up and took the robe off me and turned me toward her. "Oh yeah, look at the size" She reached for between my legs.

"Back off" I said with a bit of anger, behind my blushing. "I'm taken, and you have Kyle."

"He told me he wanted you to join" She replied

Kyle muttered, "Yeah... heh, I thought you might wanna, join"

"Well sorry... I don't" I said then walked upstairs and took a shower.

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13 Minutes Later
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I walked downstairs with my hair still damp and looked at Kyle and Meg.

"Dude!" Was all I could say when I looked at them.  They were having sex right on the couch. The couch that I was supposed to sleep on tonight.

Trying to get the picture out of my head, I went to the basement and got my clothes out. They were dry from the washer/dryer.

After getting dressed and drying my hair the rest of the way, I walked upstairs.

"Hey Kyle I'm sleeping in your room since you two decided to have sex on the couch" Then I walked upstairs and entered his room.

I couldn't believe what I saw in there... I'll never forget it.

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To be continued
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I was confused about the category to put it in...

This is fake. Any ideas in it are fake. The brands I used in this, are followed by a TM sign. They are the real thing. I did use my name in this, but I am not part of this story.

Please leave feedback ;_; I never get feedback on stories...

Should I continue it?
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Darklugia2414's avatar
YES
and if I saw my best freind...doing that,i'd have a heart attack